Thursday, May 22, 2008

Do You Want to Kill Yourself?


In every second, five teenagers are starting to smoke. One of the biggest reasons is actors in a movie. Actors are smoking all the time in movies. When the teenagers see this, they want to smoke, too. Because they think the actors look cool, and want to be like their favorite stars, their heroes. Right now, teenage smoking is really big issue of society. According to the research in Korean magazine, adult smoking decreases every year, but teenage smoking increase rapidly.

Most important period in life time is of course teenage years, because in teenage period, they are growing physically and mentally. In every day, every moment, new, young cells are continually produced. But cigarette represses this phenomenon; it just gives physical weakness. Therefore, much smoking tends to injure the voice, lung, and blood cycle. In addition, it can cause mental pain . Finally, the cigarette betrays the full growth, and controls one's mind. It causes hardness for ordinary regular life.

Millions of teenage exposed to danger in one year. Some of them want to escape from the deep, dangerous nicotine swamp. However it's really hard because smoking is addictive. It's one of the matters of teenage smoking. Even the adults can't stop smoking if they want. In case of teenagers, because they don't have determination and self control much as adults, they are exposed to danger more than adults.

One of the most dangerous things to attack your body are of course drinking and smoking. Especially smoking is easier to addicted. Only twenty and thirty years ago, the smoking was monopoly of adults. But as time as passed by, teenage smoking is increasing, so billions of teenagers are falling into the deep swamp of the smoking. Therefore, teenage smoking is really hot issue for our society. The teenagers have less determination and self control as much as adults, so if the smoking is effecting and effecting their body even mental, they can't remove the smoking. As a result, it prevents growing their bone structure, and dominantes their life. The smoking is same as selling one's life to evil. If you are a teenage smoker,do you know this serious matter can causes by your smoking?

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5 comments:

El said...

i like your post on this one, its really interesting, its all true

SML =) fly high =) said...

Wow, you chose good topic and it is really interesting though.
Nice Job!!!!
I like it!

JoHn.P said...

I agree to your essay. Everything that you wrote in your essay is true.

Mr.J said...

Yes, this is really a big problem.
If you write about the solution, that would be nice.

jove said...

This topic has been discussed all over the world, and is a really big issue. You have chosen a great topic to argue about.
I know your trying your best in English, but there are some grammar mistakes. I know your trying, i see your effort in putting some big words in there. I really see your effort, but just let someone go over it with you to go through your mistakes ok da hee.. anyways take care.